Wednesday, September 26, 2007

Violent Thoughts












Oh Slug!
Whose moist supple body
insinuated itself through a slender gap
secretively slipping on a mucusoid path
furtively

Oh Slug!
No welcome moonlight
revealed your rasping radular
ravaging my hopeful harvest
of cucumbers

Oh Slug!
I will relocate you, expose you
on this crevassed concrete
for some tightly feathered
blackbird's snack

8 comments:

  1. Ugh!! Sorry about the slugs!! That's one reason I don't DO gardening. LOL.

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  2. ewwwww at the slugs.

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  3. Lol at the poem!

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  4. I hate slugs they always nibble (I accidentally typed nipple at first, that would be quite the sight..no?) at my plants.

    Love the poem!

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  5. LOL
    great poem! :)
    (sorry about the slugs though.)

    amy

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  6. Oh, brilliant!

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